Olde Phoenix Inn

Yo’esiy: "They were unhappy you stopped them from forcing other people to fight to the death? I don't like rushing to judgment, but. They sound like they could use a few lightning bolts for breakfast. What kind of service are you in? Police, military? You explore but stop illegal fight clubs?" L1: ...

Innkeeper wrote: ↑

Fri Jul 04, 2025 3:52 am

Yo’esiy: "Minotaurs? I do not approve of gladiatorial combat, it is wasteful. And forcing anyone to do it will gainer my wrath."

L1: "Sort of. The folks doing it weren't happy when we showed up and politely asked them to quit."

H1 (Grins)

Yo’esiy: "If you need to understand I can try and break it down. The Land of Eternal Light is so because of the Sun Shard. It's a massive caldrea. The Sun Shard is THE Weapon of Legend. It is made from a living piece of the Sun himself. It shines with the light of the Sun. Get too close and you pul...

I would assume Greek Gyro is that. Orion dishes are spiced differently, but that is not what she ordered. She got a wonderful juicy goat loaf with onions tomatoes and tzatziki sauce on pita bread of the gods. I want two. I assume here that the Inn wouldn't serve anyone anything that would hurt them...

Innkeeper wrote: ↑

Fri Jul 04, 2025 12:15 am

My writhing is mostly therapy.

I want to show you the crazy people in my head.

These write ups are a tiny patch on the inns you're making. I thought I was going to have to rebuild the Arkiri. Turnhs out Richard Merk was using a similar description for his bad guys in his old stories. I had an idea, but he said he had no problems with the Arkiri as written Which means I get to ...

Yo’esiy: ":You two are full of questions. We were on an interdiction to stop a power hungry fool from committing a bad idea. We ended up in the land of Eternal Light, which was a good thing as we found a crashed ship crew beating off the dinosaurs. We carefully called our ship in, avoiding the Sun ...

Innkeeper wrote: ↑

Mon Jun 30, 2025 4:10 pm

You do over write your setting and then feel compelled to follow that. Setting is the handmaiden of the story, not the other way around.

I think a comparison of my notes and then the resulting stories will disprove that.

But I have to get my bullshit straight before I start bullshitting.

I'd like to see pics of that.

Things are getting too complicated in the story. I am doing too much table setting and not enough getting to the point.

so I have to go back and simplify

L1: "Sorry, I don't know those places. I do come from very far away. What do you do in the City of Gold?" Yo’esiy: "I am a magician working for the crown as a trouble shooter. When there is trouble, my companions and I go shoot it." L1: "I had a similar assignment myself just recently. What sort of...